Showing posts with label Raking Hay (#1) continued. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Raking Hay (#1) continued. Show all posts

Monday, January 20, 2014

Raking Hay (1) - More Work

It's Monday night, and I am going to share the painting I have done since last Tuesday.   In other words, this is an exhibit of work pre-class critique - gasp!

First, a re-view of last week's work:


The lake needed additional work as did the foreground.  Here it is now.


I think the tractor needs to be "grounded" as it appears to be floating.  I really wanted the foreground "hay field" to be more yellow.  I thought I had it but then I toned it down too much.  This painting reminds me of the "Four Little Peppers and How They Grew" in style.  It lacks that free-floating sense that many watercolors have - fluidity.  This seems more heavily worked to my eye.  Over-worked?

I'll have to wait and listen carefully to tomorrow's critique.